suicide note

If I die don't be afraid

I will always be here

In your thoughts I will hide

feeling hopeless on what to do

slice so deep I turn blue

don't stop me

please stop me

bury me in the shade

under the stars so I can watch the world

so I can watch you and keep pushing you

live today and tomorrow

I will lay in this grave waiting for you

bring me flowers everyday

tell me about your day

I will always be listening even though I cannot speak

your heart will beat and it'll be me

Love you forever this is my end

slice so deep I am at peace

Reviews

[t.m.]

I can feel the pain in this. And I know it so well, I wish nobody had to. This broke my heart.

[Anastasia Rae]

First of all, let me start by saying that I hope this isn't how you're feeling ! This was sad to read because it's such a depressing thing. I really enjoyed this, morbid as it is. It's very well written and it gets the point across. Slice so deep I'm at peace, that line gave me goosebumps. Good job .