LOVEBITE

LOVEBITE

A Poem by Chris38
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A vampire tale

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A dark and humid night it is indeed
Too hot for my long black cloak but what care I for the weather?
I see the house now far below me
He lies there within his mind calling out to me
He bids me to hurry for the waiting is too much
I enter his room and see him there with that look on his face
A beautiful face like my memories of the sunrise
Our eyes meet across the room and I advance towards him
Our eyes are locked now and our minds are as one
He sits up and offers himself to me like an eager lover
The pleasure, the ecstasy as I pierce the skin with my fangs
The soaring joy as the blood flows and our hearts begin to beat together as one
The magic connection as out thoughts and our brains merge
The blessed release in his eyes as the soul departs
The feeling always different yet always the same
Master and servant now are as one to spend eternity together
He follows me as we leave behind this house
He follows me as we leave behind this life
A life that he once thought was everything to him
As we take to the night sky he gives no thought to those he leaves behind
As we fly up to the stars and circle the moon he gives them no thought
I am his family now all that he will ever need
He is my family now and he is all that I need

© 2011 Chris38


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Amazing and dark write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A dark and romantic vampire tale. I really like it. I'm a great fan of vampire writes and I really like yours a lot.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm a fan of Ann Rice, so you can imagine how much this reminded me of her style. This is sexy and a little haunting.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aaah this reminds me of "mirror, mirror on the wall save that yours deals with two males while that one deals with a male and a female. I like this Chris you do indeed have atalent don't let hide under a bushel.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Chris38
Chris38

Liverpool, North west England, United Kingdom



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I am 38 years old and work in the care industry with adults with learning difficulties. I have been writing on and off since I was six years old. I had some stuff published when I was in my teens but .. more..

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