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A Poem by Chris38
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Wanting what you can' t have

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A worshipping glance was cast
at you when you didn't notice
carefully, taking care
that your life didn't change

© 2011 Chris38


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When looking at perfection...we do not wish to change one thiing about t...do we ??love and God bless..Kathie

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The wanting of someone yet afraid to take the risk. That's a real troubling place to be. I really like this piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I believe you are taking about Jesus. Some people love him while other don't.

Posted 13 Years Ago


There's something so beautiful in simplicity that you seem to capture so well with your poems. Fantastic work

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Chris38
Chris38

Liverpool, North west England, United Kingdom



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I am 38 years old and work in the care industry with adults with learning difficulties. I have been writing on and off since I was six years old. I had some stuff published when I was in my teens but .. more..

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