This morning I awoke early before the rest of my family arose. I faithfully emptied yesterday’s coffee grains from the filter. I proceeded to fill up the carafe with the specially filtered water from the refrigerator; taking a whole 5 minutes to fill to the top. Then, I reached for the bag of my Mocha Java blend and Whoosh, my hand-made no purchase. Dang, we are out of coffee beans. So, that just will not stand in the household of mine. Naturally, I set out in the gentle rain to Caribou Coffee. As I was driving, I was thinking of my nono(grandpa in Italiano). He used to say some of the funniest things. One of the phrases that I heard all the time was: “You can polish a turd, but it’s still just a turd.” I apologize for using such a crude term but, you had to know my grandpa.He suffered from mental illness and random bouts of brilliance as well.As that statement was tumbling around in my mind, I had an idea for a poem about how we shine the illustrious patina of our facade while the inside of our souls are decaying, slowly losing the spark of hope, being extinguished forever. The bible says in the book of Mark Chapter 8 verse 36: “What good is it for a man to gain the whole world, yet forfeit his soul?” If you are a striver of material things, if you constantly reach for the brass ring, stop and focus on the real problem in your life: sin and a desire to strive in your own power and the mounting rebellion our hearts are prone to do. You can’t put a beautiful varnish on top of rotten wood. God wants to make you shine from the inside out. That is true beauty and when God does something he starts out with a perfect foundation(the forgiveness of sins thanks to His Son and the unwavering belief in Jesus’ deity) and builds every thing else on top of that marvelous truth. Don’t be afraid of living an authentic life, not living in crippling fear of what others think of you and accepting a calling that will transform your decaying heart into a treasure more valued than diamonds, silver and gold.
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Nicely done -- but one thing I noticed is you start it off and end it with a rhyming scheme except for the end of the middle 3rd stanza. It kind of took away from the flow of the piece at that certain point.. But other than that, I understood the message and for the most part it was very well written. Great write.
That last stanza made me laugh so hard. The whole t**d thing for some reason is hilarious to me. I have to agree with that one girl that the thrid stanza throws ya off your reading groove. but other than that its a great write.
Another great poem! I think you express here a feeling everyone can relate to- the simultaneous desire to present a fake facade to the rest of the world and repulsion toward inauthenticity. The couplets and rhythm in the words makes it sound almost like a parody of a nursery rhyme, which I think makes it sound very witty, contrasting the sometimes heavy feelings that can go along with this kind of subject matter. I think if you polished the rhythm a little more and made the lines more uniform in length, it would be even better.
Haha.... I won't apologize. You make me want to get up and dance around this ole dreary room! He "joys over you"....and He certainly is smiling....in that, devil-may-care way of His. The poem is awesome, but the TESTIMONY? priceless. "Oh taste and see; that the Lord is good, blessed is the man that trusteth in Him."
"Only those that have been rescued from such valleys, can rejoice so completely on the mountaintops."
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