Winter warmth

Winter Warmth

Hold on to me! Don't fade away.

Don't let your soft hands be replaced by the cold air.

Are the snowflakes tearing us apart?

Don't let them in, don't let them win.

Don't let your fear take over your sensible mind.

It's cold outside, but my heart is warm.

You warmed it once. You are my warmth.

If you go, what am I to do?

I would probably just stay in the same place, frozen. I wouldn't move.

I'd stay here and wait for you.

So that, in case you would want me back, I'd be here.

Neither you, nor I want to let the ice take over our love.

Give me your hands, I'll warm them for you.

Tell me, do you want a cup of tea?

Reviews

[Rachel DeHart]

I love these lines
"It's cold outside, but my heart is warm.
You warmed it once. You are my warmth.
If you go, what am I to do? "

this is a wonderful piece. :]

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Very beautiful! I love your supportive nature you describe to help the person you love through the winter. I love the concept and your wordplay! Great write!

[Joseph - Michael]

No, thanks, I'd like to have a cup of coffee, if you don't mind...?

Anyway, this is a really nice and simple piece you've written there... It's showing that there's always a warmth hope during the coldness...

So, it's still all good tho...

[Lindsey:)]

i loved it.
it was very "different" but in a very good way.
tbis poem makes you feel at peace, and the last line is the icing on the cake.
Good job!

[Drew Wade]

hmm, this is super interesting. it's interesting because it's feels traditional, but it's not traditional. It's kind of begging to be read and not just be looked at for its form.

you are consistent through the entire thing, and that's something most people can't do. and you bring a warm feeling to it. i love the last line. I do want a cup of tea, thank you.

[Doctor Deathstab]

Winter usually puts me in the mood to snuggle...or it depresses me. I liked this poem.