Who's Damn Flag is it Anyway???

Who's Damn Flag is it Anyway???

A Poem by T. L. O'Neal

Who’s Damn Flag is it, Anyway???

Written by T. L. O’Neal

 

You sent me hate mail

Over something I said

About seeing a flag

That’s blue, white and red

 

You call me names

And talk about the dead

You never did a damn thing

But b***h over what you read

 

I asked if you ever

Tried to make a change

You just ranted on

Like you were deranged

 

I talked about the soldiers

And how they all died

All you ever said

Was that I should fry

 

You cursed me for caring

For these poor lost souls

They died for your sorry a*s

And countless ones untold

 

It’s your right to say…

Even if it has little appeal

It’s America, you can say

Whatever you think and feel

 

But if all you do is rant and b***h

And never try to make a change

All you’re doing is screwing yourself

And losing out in the exchange

 

You never did a damn thing

So what it all boils down to is this…

If you don’t try to make a change

Ignorance isn’t necessarily bliss

 

I don’t like the way things are

But I know this much is true

I love that flag more than ever

With the red, white and blue

 

© 2008 T. L. O'Neal


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-salute- May our flag fly high and show that we are free! I liked this poem... my father fought in Vietnam and I have several friends over seas protecting the rights of freedom. I hope every true American reads this and feels proud to be an American... regardless of what we feel about the war or about our government. America is a land of people who share one trait: we are free. And I'm damn proud to be an American!

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And by the way, this is awesome. No holds-barred, plain-English, no double-speak. It went right in my Favs. ;-)

Posted 17 Years Ago


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Well then, T.L. If it weren't for hate-mail, I'd have very little mail at all these past fews days. But at least hate is an emotion. Our words can inspire such strong emotions as hate; that's an accomplishment. You've no idea what I've been called the last few days, all because I won't back down from my beliefs in the face of weak, by-rote arguments against those beliefs. No skin off my nose. Popularity is overrated anyway.

And now for your enjoyment.... Merriam-Webster presents "The Real Definition of Fascism for All Those Too Stupid To Use the Word Correctly":

"a political philosophy, movement, or regime (as that of the Fascisti) that exalts nation and often race above the individual and that stands for a centralized autocratic government headed by a dictatorial leader, severe economic and social regimentation, and forcible suppression of opposition
2 : a tendency toward or actual exercise of strong autocratic or dictatorial control".

Posted 17 Years Ago


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Simple, patriotic, true --- Nicely written. I abhor those who speak out against those excercising their freedom of speech. As a soldier, every American has the right to say whatever they damn well please. I chose to fight for that 7 years ago. If they want to spit in my face, or by me lunch, it's all the same to me. As long as whatever they say or do - they mean it, and consider it something worth fighting for. We are American, we fight. This is our creed, we live by it.

-B

Posted 17 Years Ago


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T.L. You've hit the nail right on the head with this piece. Love of ones country and pride in the collective achievements of ones fellow countrymen and women is a beautiful thing.

Your poem epitomises all of the above in a straight forward and passionate manner and for that, I applaud you.



Posted 17 Years Ago


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Excellent rant, Terry.That's the problem with the world, we're all so obsessed with supporting our countries - wherever we live - not for purely personal reasons, but because we all want to be a part of the crowd, to be accepted by our neighbours. Who wants to speak out? If something isn't right, I say, let us all shout it from the rooftops.The USA is, without a doubt, the greatest country in the world, bar none (Ireland is second). Heck, even Britain is a great nation. But when freedom of speech is killed, any country suffers... how soon we forget the generations that fought against communism.When governments lie, freedom dies. And we all become slaves to the lie.

Posted 17 Years Ago


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It always bothered me when individuals who do nothing to help our society yet are the first to b***h. Its these ignorant people who make me think less of the morality within our world.. On a personal note i love hate mail.. it lets me know i am making some sort of difference

Posted 17 Years Ago


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God bless our veterans and soldiers! And, horray for you, TL! Nice poem, which I believe expresses the thoughts and passions of a majority of our citizens!

Posted 17 Years Ago


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heh. i think it was an article in national geographic.... but it might have even been my local paper.....

it was about how soldiers were coming home from iraq expecting a change here in the states, but not seeing a damn differance. a few of them said how some americans just aren't worth fighting for. from a civilian point of view, it's hard to swallow. from a soldiers point of view... it's truth.

good job bro.

Posted 17 Years Ago


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this poem has been written by a real american patriot!

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You set two sets of point of view, and do not yield to your patriotism,
remembering the symbol of our flag, red, white, and blue,

-----MIshel

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I started writing as a way to work out my feelings and found that I enjoyed it very much. I enjoy humor and feel that you can find it in most things, even though it may be hard to find at the moment. .. more..

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