You Healed my Heart

You Healed My Heart

Written by: T. L. O’Neal

 

You came along at the right time

When my heart was broken in two

You took your love and compassion

And the pain in my heart you withdrew

 

You did this for no other reason

Than to mend a broken heart

But after that my love for you

Nothing could tear us apart

 

I don’t know if I was worthy

To accept your loving ways

You were always good to me

And for this I have only praise

 

You make me so happy

This is very plain to see

You loved unconditionally

And loved me for me

 

You gave passion back to me

And made me feel like a man

With your loving gentle touch

From your silky smooth hand

 

Like a gentle cool breeze

Turning my embers to fire

You returned my passion

And restored my desire

 

Now it has been almost ten months

And everyday seems new

I want to repay you with my love

Because you took away the blue

 

Reviews

[C. Harter Amos]

A really beautiful poem, T. I love the strength and conviction of all you say. "Nothing could tear us apart", "unconditional love", "made me feel like a man", it's a relationship at its best. "I don't know if I was worthy - To accept your loving ways - You were always good to me - And for this I have only praise". It's just so sweet it makes me want to cry! Sounds like you guys are lucky to have found each other. Beautiful poetry on both pages for your birthday. There is no better gift in the world than true love from someone's heart!

[Angelheaded Hipster]

These words were written with the truth in mind. The love is evident throughout, and I do know just how much she means to you...The last line is an excellent closer to the journey you took us on with the developing love of one another...

You and Judy are truly blessed...

[Fran Marie]

Oh this is such a beautiful write for the one you love
and filled with such loving devotion which two people share~
Very well penned indeed~ Fran Marie

[Erotic Goddess]

Took away the blue... Such a beautiful compliment that you could give to a person. This is a beautiful poem, full of emotion and longing and it is so honest and open. I enjoyed reading this. I hope that she knows how blessed she is as well, but then again, I suspect that she does. This is a beautiful gift.

xxoxx
Stephanie

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

A lovely compassionate write, my friend. Lots of luck on your contest.


Great Write