Good Morning

Good Morning

A Poem by The Pain Stays Fresh

I wake to the sound
of chirping birds outside my window.
Such a happy sound.
It brightens my day and puts a spring in my step.
The sun is shining
as if to say "Have a happy day, today."

© 2012 The Pain Stays Fresh


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Amazing, that's a very vivid, and pleasant, image, it makes me come back in my mind to the time when i used to live in Rio, every morning was pretty much like that :)
Great job !

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love the whole view of the poem good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great poem to start well the day. Made me smile.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Good tone, flow, and rhythm.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is such a wonderful light read. Amazing

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 14, 2012
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The Pain Stays Fresh
The Pain Stays Fresh

Alma, AR



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I'm a total black sheep. I love reading, writing, talking, music older than I am, and watching old westerns on rainy days. I prefer writing stories and short poetry. You'd think by reading some of my.. more..

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