Good Morning

I wake to the sound

of chirping birds outside my window.

Such a happy sound.

It brightens my day and puts a spring in my step.

The sun is shining

as if to say "Have a happy day, today."

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

well, i love this poem much than my poem...lol, it's nice piece. I wanna read more if you'll continue it...

[The Pain Stays Fresh]

Thanks. That's sweet. :)

[Wórdsmíth]

well, it should be sweet for sweet girl...:)

[RachelReaper]

This was so cheerful it actually put me in a better mood, nice write

[The Pain Stays Fresh]

Haha. Thanks. I don't know what possessed me to write it. I hate mornings.

[RachelReaper]

all of my friends are the same way.

[Stanley Wilson]

lovely positive vibe

[Green]

You put such a positive spin out of something I've never enjoyed and you painted a picture with your words while you did it. Good job.

[The Pain Stays Fresh]

Thanks. :) Sorry it took me a while to get back to you. Just lost my internet and I'm doing everything on my phone. It's kind of a pain. :/

[Green]

Not a problem

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Any day I wake up is a happy day... love the positive vibe of the poem.

[The Pain Stays Fresh]

Thanks. :)

[Falling Leaf.]

Short, simple, and sweet. The only hiccup I could find is the comma in the last line. Seems to tamper with your rhythm.
Keep up the good work!
~The Wilted Rose

[Dean Kuch®]

A beautiful ode to the start of a day of wonders. Well done!

[mynameisyou]

Cheyenne, thank you for the review and you keep up the good work!!

[khalid]

wowww..you have drawn so nice beautiful images here..your poem is very cheerful and optimistic...i really like mornings with sounds of birds but i didnt know that they were saying goodmorning...i like your poem sooo much, nicely written

[Laura S.]

I love the tone of this poem and the way it started and concluded. Just lovely