Genuine

Genuine

A Poem by The Pain Stays Fresh

I've never done anything to hurt you.
So why do you feel the need to hurt me?
Is it because I'm not as pretty as you?
As skinny as you?
As popular as you?
One day those things will be gone.
You will have nothing
and I will have everything.
Because I am genuine.

© 2012 The Pain Stays Fresh


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if others dont love us as we are, we shouldnt love them however they are. very nicely written with nice sweet feelings..

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ba-bam! I can definitely relate to this. It sort of reminds me of Taylor Swift's song, Mean. A way I enjoy looking at it," Outer beauty fades, but inner beauty can last a lifetime."
Nicely written :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


The Pain Stays Fresh

12 Years Ago

Thanks for the awesome review! I'm not a big fan of Taylor Swift though.
Alana McGuire

12 Years Ago

You're most definitely welcome!
Bold and true. We all have that one girl who wants to demolish us simply because she can. Stay strong!
~The Wilted Rose

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful poem. Keep up the good work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I bet they don't see what i do.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Again - good flow, tone, and rhythm.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like this and the well formed ideas behind it i like the base it is sweet and short

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 14, 2012
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The Pain Stays Fresh
The Pain Stays Fresh

Alma, AR



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I'm a total black sheep. I love reading, writing, talking, music older than I am, and watching old westerns on rainy days. I prefer writing stories and short poetry. You'd think by reading some of my.. more..

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