Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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What is Love?

What is Love?

A Poem by The Pain Stays Fresh

I was asked once
"What is love?"
Here is your answer.
Love is beautiful
and kind
and trusting.
Love is the safety net
that catches you when you fall.
Love is always there.
It never strays too far.
It is a warm coat 
to chase away the cold
of peoples' icy hearts.
Love is ever persistent.
It never gives up.
This world would do well
to have more love.
~♥~

© 2012 The Pain Stays Fresh


Author's Note

The Pain Stays Fresh
Special thanks to Khalid. His poem Love Coat inspired these lines. ----> "It is a warm coat to chase away the cold...."

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Beautiful, but it would be wrong to conclude this is all love is. You've only shown one side of the emotion - Love can do the exact opposite thing to us you imply it does. It is a wonderful poem, but you're only addressing half of the emotion. It is very well written and I like the little detail at the end - the little heart. You did a great job - but might I suggest editing the title to become "What is Love to Me?". It is your poem ad you've the right to do with it as you like - this is just one of many differentiating opinions.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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A gentle and wish-full view...

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Love is a very complicated emotion, but this helps one's understanding of its many mysteries.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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you defined the word love perfectly.
and love is pitying one another and that's humanity.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Despite my status as a cantankerous old man, I can see the poetic beauty in this even if I think you DID leave out that Love is an antique. Hummmm ... did I just give myself inspiration??

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Beautiful Babygirl

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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The Pain Stays Fresh
The Pain Stays Fresh

Alma, AR



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I'm a total black sheep. I love reading, writing, talking, music older than I am, and watching old westerns on rainy days. I prefer writing stories and short poetry. You'd think by reading some of my.. more..

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