Beautiful, but it would be wrong to conclude this is all love is. You've only shown one side of the emotion - Love can do the exact opposite thing to us you imply it does. It is a wonderful poem, but you're only addressing half of the emotion. It is very well written and I like the little detail at the end - the little heart. You did a great job - but might I suggest editing the title to become "What is Love to Me?". It is your poem ad you've the right to do with it as you like - this is just one of many differentiating opinions.
Instead of chasing away the cold, wouldn't a warm coat protect what is important and keep it secure? I could picture you turning your collar to the damp and freeze as snowflakes frost-bomb your nose. : ) It's a cute poem.... A pretty poem!! Beautiful Cheyenne. xoxo -Mark
first, you are so much welcome, you made me appreciate my poem about love coat more, i am really happy that my poem shared in producing such a nicely written poem..all i can say is, i really like it..thank you
Beautiful, but it would be wrong to conclude this is all love is. You've only shown one side of the emotion - Love can do the exact opposite thing to us you imply it does. It is a wonderful poem, but you're only addressing half of the emotion. It is very well written and I like the little detail at the end - the little heart. You did a great job - but might I suggest editing the title to become "What is Love to Me?". It is your poem ad you've the right to do with it as you like - this is just one of many differentiating opinions.
Something light and swooning to read in a cold night, such a wondrous figment from a young, insightful mind. This poem made me miss my guy even more :| anyway that doesn't matter, what matters is that you did a pretty good job :)
I'm a total black sheep. I love reading, writing, talking, music older than I am, and watching old westerns on rainy days. I prefer writing stories and short poetry. You'd think by reading some of my.. more..