Shades of Green

Shades of Green

A Poem by ChocolateAddict

bountiful bliss
vibrant and warm
pastures
meadows
alive and clean
swirling scent

delightful depth
bright and sweet
eyes
Oh!
Your eyes!
mesmerizing and bold
glittering gaze

© 2012 ChocolateAddict


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simple yet bold

Posted 12 Years Ago


The rush of being smitten is like being dizzy with imagery and senses. I at first found myself looking for rhymes been then a paid attention to the meter and realized it was self contained. The thought conveyed is strong and complex in depth.

Posted 12 Years Ago


LOVE IT!!

and its really cool how its actually green ahaha

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 8, 2012
Last Updated on April 8, 2012
Tags: green, color, eyes, senses

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Married, mother of two. Has ongoing love affair with chocolate. Flirty, funny and frank. May also be grumpy or gabby. Mostly known for sarcasm and a love for cats. Weaknesses include but are not.. more..

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A Poem by ChocolateAddict