A Sweet SurrenderA Poem by Gionelly KissA poem about a past love for a group challenge.Your deviled eyes deceived me From the corner of the room I perceived the haughty smile full of malice And I shivered from your cold, cold love I turned and faced the wall behind me My story written there A novel of hopeful romance Written with the blood of my broken heart Lovely whispers of seduction penetrated my fate written there Images of your lies reflected on my being, a truth I could not escape A magnet of temptation swayed me into arms of promises And into delicate rose petals that tickled my lips I feel them now as I sit upon the comfy past In the corner where our first love pronounced itself The hazy heat of passion frozen in stone With a description below in bold: A Sweet Surrender As opposite as fire and snow We grew in hate then love Our hatred more my own at the façade of evil He produced in that corner of the room And I on the opposite a victim of his stare Held prisoner not in fear but unknown passion and love One day I ceded to the shadow of hateful passion Of your being oppressed over mine Instead of quaking in my corner I stepped onto burning charcoal stones A wave of refreshing passion spilled from your ice cold eyes And cooled the way for me as I glided to your place There I submissively bowed and involuntarily growled As you kissed my neck, my eyes, then slowly my lips Then my eyes sparkled, reflected in your own deep pools The fire of passion"actual love"pouring itself and connecting us two As waves we crashed together onto unexplored shores Gently testing here and there but sweetly we surrendered The stars, they sparkled bright that night, While the man on the moon sung to our dance Your lips and hands caressed me swaying to this song And slowly I blended into you, I your heart and you my love I feel you still now as I sit upon the comfy past In the corner where our first love pronounced itself The hazy heat of passion frozen in stone With a description below in bold: A Sweet Surrender © 2010 Gionelly KissReviews
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Added on April 11, 2010Last Updated on May 3, 2010 Previous Versions AuthorGionelly KissColumbus, GAAbout¡Hola! Soy una Boriqua que le ENCANTA escribir poemas tanto en Español, mi lengua natal, como Ingles. ¡Por favor, disfruten! Hello! I am a puertorriqueña (of Puerto Rico) .. more..Writing
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