To the Readers

Hiaku!, bless you that term means nothing to me

Even if i spoke Chinese i wouldnt understand Jintishi

By no way, shape, or form do i mean disrespect

But Im not a scholar of poetic terms i deeply regret

Dont delete me if you read me and its not at all iambic

I just write what i feel inside if you can understand it

At this point i would pay the cost to be labeled Cavalier

So i could woo you in closer as i whisper to your inner ear

I am ready to go to war

Faithful pen in hand

I only wish to to make my heart

Bleed onto this pad

To Athena, i mean to the reader from my chair

I feel im getting better so dont dispair

Now if i keep in check the way i spel there could be hope

But dont hold your breath just yet its underlined not a quote

Author's Note

Thanks to everyone whos been giving great reviews even though i have so many mistakes and just thanks to everyone who has read my work and didnt leave anything, it lets me know that im not just writing for myself, though i know that Im no master poet, i do have a soul and i just want to share it with you.........

Reviews

[An Open Venue]

There is talent and there is skill; One just is or is not and the other can be learned;
I would choose tenant any day.
write from your heart; push yourself and time will do the rest.
Just keep writing and sharing.

Oh...

and read others there is much to learn from how your peers put together words.
peace :)
Ven

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Wow, I have never read your poetry yet, and this just blew me out of the water. From the first line there was a power and energy in it, more than others I have seen. I could see this as a spoken word poem, read by a fierce voice. good job. looking for more.

[Jessica Dallaire]

I like this a lot, it is very good. And just write from your soul. It's art and it doesn't have to follow rules. That's what is so amazing about it!

[BLACKCRUSH]

Don't count your mistakes! You have had Many victories in your work....."When you cease to make a contribution , you begin to die". ER I loved your poem