Good-Man

they ask where did they all go

they ask as if we arent here anymore

blinded by disloyalty - treason

i come to give  legitimate reason

open your mind and listen

we've been here since the begaining

we make mistakes and bad decisions

not the same as others Im my own rendition

see we're not that different; us and them

they dont understand your language im a bit more fluent

so i stand up off all fours you put me on

doesnt matter who did what my actions are all my own

on the 5th day God put me on the land

ask around sometime, Im what you call a good man

Reviews

[Walkingblind]

I love how you describe a good man as being a male who has
went through hard times, made bad decisions, but rises above all
This is beautifully raw

[Lyrical Love]

I really like the voice that screams tender he-motions!!!

[Wicked]

I like this, This is wonderful full of expression.

[BLACKCRUSH]

WOW!!! Where did you come from?? Love your poem from beginning to end. Need to here more of these.

[Tonya]

Very nice write. I love to see it when men open their hearts and express relationship emotions!

[BEEGE]

Very Nice! Very Nice!!
Its a sad fact that there aren't
too many of us out there ya know.
Anyhow, congrats on writting a great
peice. This was truly enjoyed.

Beege