So F*****g Adjective.

So F*****g Adjective.

A Poem by Chloe Madison Taylor.
"

Hi my name is Chloe, and I am insane. Hi my name is Chloe, and I am insane. Hi my name is Chloe, and I am insane. Hi my name is Chloe, and I am insane.

"

Sleep is for regulating breathing

awake is awake but I still wake up dreaming

The last page was ripped out, but I kept on reading

Childhood is happiness, when we all lived believing

we'd take turns ruling the world .

 

"She's still waiting for - "

(and we all)

sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep

we all do nothing but

and witness a disaster a day

or less or more

 

Ive been barricading the windows for days now.


Confess these truths to eight pillows plush
I have never been robbed a day by any but myself
The utmost unbig thing to never be seen
stuck in a rutt of my immeasurable dreams
covered in cigarette ash and
bile
and screams.

-"that first full night's sleep"             . Live

(I will and I will and I will)
until twice I have slept forever without pills.

© 2009 Chloe Madison Taylor.


Author's Note

Chloe Madison Taylor.
I deleted alot of stuff.
gah.

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Damn sleep is hard to find sometimes. Too much B.S is overtaking our minds. I like the description and the emotion of the words. A good night sleep is good when it can happen. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very good and extremely creative. This is the type of poem that I can read multiple times and have different meanings. I'm tired right now so I'll spare you (or myself) my interpretation.

Posted 13 Years Ago


gawd I love you. Id eat your brain. gross huh?

but true!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Dom
This was AWESOME!

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow. this is really god. fast-paced, frantic, my heartbeat quickened as i read through.

Posted 14 Years Ago


badass

Posted 14 Years Ago


Thats an amazing poem. The structure and form of it doesn't come off as pretentious at all. This is one of the first poems I've read that I can imagine being read much differently than the average spoken poem. A lot of great imagery and allusions to insanity as well.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I still really like it, though it's much different than I remember it.
Great write.
-Elissa

Posted 15 Years Ago


I absolutely adore this poem.
It's so believable, honest, real.
"the last page was ripped out but I kept on reading" - that was so well put.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You're dope!!! I love your creativity and original formats. You commit to your style and I digs!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 24, 2008
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