PukeBreath.

Trust yourself, stick to your guns now, its only worth it if it gets hard.

My kidney seems to be failing

I have chlorine scented hair

My skin is sunburnt flavored

memories smoked beyond repair.

I'm stuck in a dream

but im trying to wake up.

swimming in your sheets

and im tired of getting stuck

Looking for the door,

but finding the bedroom floor instead.

your lips are looking for a kiss,

and im looking for the switch.

turn the lights back on,

Give real life another try

make sure you stay true to yours,

because im sticking close to mine.

but everyone got up, and noone cried

the very same night that summer died.

 

Author's Note

its not clever at all.
i dotn know why i just cant write anythign good anymore.

picture is a Against Me! shirt i got signed by the band.

Reviews

[Last Lying Look]

I love it. Don't ever doubt yourself as a writer. I always find all of your pieces quite clever and enjoyable.

[Gastroc.]

i love it. keep on writing!

[Zatoichi]

honest emotion trumps the merely clever every time. i like the poem and LUV the title.