Betrayed.

Betrayed.

A Poem by Chloe Madison Taylor.
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I cant make it any more clear.

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With a knife behind his back,

and a grin on his face.

 

he asked for a kiss.

© 2008 Chloe Madison Taylor.


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This gave me goosebumps! How thrilling

Posted 7 Years Ago


First time I read it, It was funny. Second time, it was scary. Third time, it was sweet.
F**k, I feel so... left out. I look down at these reviews and know they know which one it is. I don't.
Ask the dude-person if I can have the knife. I'll be needing it...

Posted 16 Years Ago


it's true. oh, so true.

Posted 16 Years Ago


OMFG
this is my faovrite thing EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER EVER !
i know how you feel.
straight to my favorites. !

Posted 16 Years Ago


Simple and to the point and far more telling than what the words themselves say. Great write
LGD

Posted 16 Years Ago


ohhh thats like a hakiu and it says alot more then just the 3 lines you wrote... so thats really good... nice job

Posted 16 Years Ago



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