Monster

could be a killer, crazy person, sex. interpret it your way :)

and as she leaned over me

there was a wildness in her eyes

and that wildness scared me.

 

i was scared for my life

when i saw that hunger burning

and she was hungry for me.

 

and as she lay there

panting in exasperation

i saw i didn't want her that way.

 

she slowed down and looked at me

and for a second

the fire dissapeared.

 

and she was my Becca again.

and she wasn't crazy.

and she wasn't hungry.

 

and i liked it that way.

Author's Note

review plz :)

Reviews

[Hello, Goodbye]

great write.. very ambiguous and interesting

[r]

Wow, i loved that, it was amazing. Truthfully to me, it seemed like sex {{heh...}} but i guess it could be a moment of craziness, moment of wanting to kill. But yeah, i loved it. Especially the fifth stanza. :)