Chains

weak first stanza

these chains hold me down

they've bolted me to the ground.

 

i pull

but i can't break free

 

i fight

but they're breaking me.

 

people leaugh

as they pass me by.

 

"thank God, I;m not that guy!"

 

a tousand tears stain my cheeks

as i live life in agony.

Author's Note

not my best :) sorry

Reviews

[Stripes]

I really like the concept and the rhyming. You have a few spelling and grammatical mistakes but you might already know about them. All in all, a great piece.

[.SaveSydney!.]

I like it!
It's great, at describing being held back, and well, chained down. :)
Great job!