The Struggle.

The Struggle.

A Poem by snapstache
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this came out of NOWHERE! it just hiut me and i went crazy trying to write it down :)

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i'm screaming

In an attempt to break free.

 

i'm sceaming

as i try to flee.

 

i'm fighting the urge

to let you take hold.

 

i'm fighting the urge

to just let go.

 

i know what you've done

you've got her now.

 

i know what you've done

you're holding her down.

 

she's in your grasp

out of guilt.

 

she's screaming inside

she just won't let you know.

 

she's screaming inside

as you gain control.

 

she want to stop

she wants to say no.

 

she wants to stop

so please let her go.

© 2010 snapstache


Author's Note

snapstache
this is about me in the first couple prts but i made it about my best friend :) hahaha sorry. im like outta breath it came so fast!! ahhh i'm excited :)

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Ahh;
EpRaddErful! :DD (bahaha.)
I like it.
Even though half of its about me being weak. Hahaha.
Great job though; it really is masterpiece material. ;D

Posted 14 Years Ago



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