Following

Following

A Poem by snapstache

Creeping

Sneaking

Following your path.

 

Stalking

Walking

Following fast.

 

Spying

Lying

Prying into your past.

 

He's following you

You better run fast.

© 2010 snapstache


Author's Note

snapstache
one of the few poems that i actually rhymed through most of it, :) don't expect the pattern to stay tho :( this kind ahappened without plan

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the rhyme scheme in this poem gave it a good rhythm, very tense very suspensefull. The break in the patern especialy contributed to the urgency of the poem. bravo.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on July 25, 2010
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