The Letters

The Letters

A Poem by snapstache
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NOTE* i rated it teen but there is a curse word in it.

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My heart races

As I read the note:,

You're very pretty

I wanna f**k with you

I wanna see you

I wanna kiss you

I'm coming for you.

My tears pour

The notes have been coming

More and more often.

I want to tell someone

I want to scream

But even the screaming won't make it stop.

I want to cry

But no matter how many tears I shed

They keep coming.

My door creaks open

And as suddenly as this started

It is over.

He is here

My time is now.

"Say goodnight."

© 2010 snapstache


Author's Note

snapstache
its about a stalker in case you didn't get it. reviews plz

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This is really well written, it builds suspense drawing you down the page...Even the format adds to the tension-- broadcasting emotions. Great job!!!!!...OK so only advice, the line "I wanta f**k with you" Maybe change it up, because the line gives such a strong "ghetto thug" image it kinda takes away some of the suspense by being able to profile the stalker...Idk its really great though...

Posted 14 Years Ago



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