Mama

Mama's not right

Not right at all.

 

She can't sit still

She can't be quiet.

 

She doesn't think before she speaks

Her voice is harsh.

 

Mama scares me sometimes

When she gets mad.

 

She bangs her head

Up against the wall.

 

She says she wants to die

And that is all.

 

She prays to God

To get better soon.

 

But I love my Mama.

 

I don't want her to change

Because then,

Simply,

She wouldn't be my Mama.

Author's Note

this isn't good. and if you agree...tell me. i'm tired of people telling me stuff is good because they simple don't want to hurt my feelings. If you love it say so..hate it? I wan to know..otherwise i'll never get better. :)

Reviews

[Jessie Sianodel]

It shows how much a child could love their mom, definitely.

I'm not sure if I like, although it is a good poem, just not my taste.

Honest enough for you? ; )