Sweet Dreams

Sweet Dreams

A Poem by snapstache
"

i thought i posted this, but i guess not

"

You smile that sexy smile

Your eyes blaze a blue fire

As you step closer

My heart so loud

I'm sure you can hear

Thud, thud, thud

You wan tot hurt me

That I can tell

By the way you creep

So soft

So quiet

You think I can't hear

But I hear

Your menacing growl rings in my ears

"Come here, my dear"

I try to hide

I try to run

But you keep gaining on me

I give up on trying

Your hands lock around my neck

And I choke

As you whisper

"Sweet Dreams, my dear".

© 2010 snapstache


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Author's Note

snapstache
from last year but if you read it in a scared tone out loud to yourself it sounds like really really cool :) idk where the picture's from but its sum movie

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This is cool! I'm not sure if I saw mistakes, but it's still cool!

Posted 14 Years Ago


A scary ending to the story. Like a scary story. Just needed some music. A very good poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


I can also see the images in my mind. (: I like this one.

Haha, it looks like the pic is something from like Freddie Crouger or whatever haha.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I can like see the scene of this playing in my head.
It's so cool. :D lol

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on July 20, 2010
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