Sweet Dreams

i thought i posted this, but i guess not

You smile that sexy smile

Your eyes blaze a blue fire

As you step closer

My heart so loud

I'm sure you can hear

Thud, thud, thud

You wan tot hurt me

That I can tell

By the way you creep

So soft

So quiet

You think I can't hear

But I hear

Your menacing growl rings in my ears

"Come here, my dear"

I try to hide

I try to run

But you keep gaining on me

I give up on trying

Your hands lock around my neck

And I choke

As you whisper

"Sweet Dreams, my dear".

Author's Note

from last year but if you read it in a scared tone out loud to yourself it sounds like really really cool :) idk where the picture's from but its sum movie

Reviews

[Alana Michele]

creepy! and cool :]

[MajorJesusFreak]

Nicely done. Some grammer mistakes but thats okay : ) it happens. Altogether though it was reall good.

[Chamil3001]

great!

[Camille Corbett]

So many misspellings. This poem is sick. Does not flow.

[Chelsea.]

I like this a lot :) ,
the way you worded everything.
I'm not sure if its the way i read it or not,
but i think some comma's in the begining could help,
idk :/ .
Overall, great write :]

[Jane Doe]

I LIKEIEEEEE
MWHAHAHHAHAHAHA WONDERFUL DEATH I ASSUME was denied

100/100

[Vyctm]

It's kind of creepy. I like the flow of the poem. It is haunting. There is a typo on line 7. As for the rest of the poem I liked it. Good work.

[Bexfinch]

Ohhh this was awsome i was listening to music so i could practically see it! :)

[Cassandra D.]

this was very interesting and spine chilling.
well done

[Katie]

ah such intensity! love the ending.