Individuality

I'm different than you,

You're different than me,

You hate me because,

Of my horrible looks,

I'm taunted because,

I'm not normal,

I'm not you,

You're not me,

It hurts when you strike,

With that horrible hand,

With those horrible words,

That keep being said,

I'll always be hated,

Until the day that I die,

But I'll always be self-satisfied.

 

Don't hate me because of my individuality. :)

Author's Note

be an individual not a follower

Reviews

[Kasey Jones]

This has great rhythm and a powerful message. Great job.

[Elizabeth]

Strong message, but I would definitely take out all of those commas. When there's a line break, the pause is already implied.