One Look In The Eye

for my friend again...she requested it

My heart studders to a stop,

When you look at me with those hazel eyes,

I feel the intensity,

Buring behind them,

As if you can see into my soul,

Our eyes connect,

And as if I can read your mind,

I know what your thinking,

So sweet and innocent,

My breath gets caught in my throat,

When you hold my hand and tell me I'm beautiful,

It feels so good,

I want shout it to the world,

So don't be afraid to tll anyone,

Please tell me your mind,

So I don't have to read it,

And I'll tell you mine,

So we'll have nothing to hide,

Baby please tell me you feel it too,

This connection buring between us,

Linking us together,

With one look in the eye.

Author's Note

srry sydney i know it sucks

Reviews

[Keriun]

It's nice! :) I like the way you write these poems about love, they always seem so innocent and heartfelt, the way it is supposed to be :D

Just a typo error,
"Burning" in line four.

[-TweetyBirdd.!-]

omg chloe i LOVE it! :D