Drunken Fool

for my friend...

I've wasted all my time,

You walked out the door,

And didn't leave a dime,

All my tears were wasted,

On your precious face,

You've made me realize,

That love is just a game to you,

You're playing poker with my heart,

Everything's laid down before you,

I'm that drunken fool,

Who puts it all out there,

And your the mastermind,

Who wins everytime,

Each card brings you closer to winning the prize,

I take another swig,

It's clogging up my mind,

All my information is given,

As you plot again,

You've got that drunken fool,

Thinking you love them back,

All the gifts and the kisses,

Never meant a thing to you,

But they were everything to me,

They meant the world to that drunken fool,

As I put my heart into your hands,

You know you've won this game,

He's got my world in his hands,

A smile on his face,

And as he claims his prize and walks away,

He turns arounf just to say,

"I love you, my drunken fool.".

Reviews

[Keriun]

Somehow... I feel this wasn't expressed well enough. I get where this is going though :)

[-TweetyBirdd.!-]

i love this poem!!! :)

[Alexander Stering]

Lurv it 0_0

[deeps]

I enjoyed this read. I thought it was very creative and well writte, The feelings and emotions are strong. I liked the read.