Why

Why did they do this to me,

They left me all alone,

I smile on the outside,

But it's killing me to know,

They don't love me,

They don't care at all,

Everyone snickers when they see me,

Why do they not care,

They hit me,

I cover my brusies,

With my smiles,

But they're still there,

Marking me,

Oh please,

Why,

How,

Could you do this to me?

Reviews

[The Perfectionist]

An all too common and all too often penned tragedy. Your emotion does come out very strongly here, and the pain that should be conveyed is done good justice. Well done.

[deeps]

I can really feel this wirte here.
This is quite sad and emotional.