Whisper

Whisper "I love you",

Into my ear,

Whisper "I love her",

To all your friends,

Whisper "You'll love her",

To your parents,

Whisper "She's everything",

To you dog,

Shout "I LOVE HER!",

To the whole world,

Don't be afraid of what people think,

All that matters is that,

Someone answers back.

Author's Note

plz review..i need help fixing it plz tell me what you think should be changed

Reviews

[Dev]

Aww.. Very sweet
Its the perfect wish !!
Loving someone and knowing they love you back. Thats what should matter

[deeps]

This is a wonderful write.
I have a write with the same name, but it's about my life.
I like this it is beuatiful.

[Ophielia Nyx]

I think its perfect
actually it blew me away
its the simplest wish most people ask for; to have someone do that and you be on the recieving end.
its very sweet and i could cry but i wont :)