All your Promises

All your promises,

Stick to my heart like glue,

They tear and rip it,When you try to pull away,

I look back to when there was me and you,

All your stupid promises I was stupid enough to believe,

All that junk about lovin me forever,

And that you'd never break my heart,

Looks like you blew that one,

All your stupid promises have me plagued,

As that chick,

Who was obsessed with that hot guy,

And he broke her heart,

The typical story,

But you didn't just break it,

You shattered it to a million pieces,

And those promises still stick to my heart,

I'm still naive,

And I'm waitin for you to fulfill them,

All of your promises.

Reviews

[deeps]

Such expressions of emotion in this write.
very well written and expressed fellings!

[Bullet Soul]

The feelings stated here are ones known to far too many of us. Unfulfilled promises bring the end of romances and the end of trust. This is a great piece of poetry!

[-TweetyBirdd.!-]

i can relate. *snif snif* great poem!

[Coyote Poetry]

Need to have rules and respect for yourself. A strong poem with a purpose. A person who can't keep a promise. Won't improve with time. A excellent poem.
Coyote