try again

try again

A Poem by chloe
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a poem

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when your feeling down
look up

when nothing goes right
go left

when everything is bad
make it good

when your sad
be happy

when your afraid
be brave

when you are speechless
try singing

when you cant take it
don't

when you cant love
try again

when life gets to hard to stand
try kneeling

© 2013 chloe


Author's Note

chloe
a poem i wrote! hope you like it!

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I do like it, Chloe. With such an attitude, you really can't go wrong! Loved particularly the stanza:

when nothing goes right
go left

Thanks for your poem, it has made me feel better tonight.



Posted 11 Years Ago


chloe

11 Years Ago

your welcome! and thank you!
I really like it! It's beautiful and funny

Posted 11 Years Ago


I did like it, really optimistic and inspiring write.
Well penned :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

chloe

11 Years Ago

thanks! glad you liked it!
annabellee

11 Years Ago

you're most welcome :)

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Added on July 25, 2013
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Tags: stay strong, try again, fighter, one more time, kneeling, on our knees, sing, be happy

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