All of Me

All of Me

A Poem by Chloe

All of me

Is yours

 

Sear sand of

Places you’ve traveled

To my

Toes

Pictures of you

Hang on

my mirror and

Windows

In my reflection

I think of

You.

If you wallow

In depths of

Depression

Sulk in my fingertips

As I trace your

Body as my

World

Stay, please

Let your wet

Hair scent

Seep into my

pillow

So I can

Smell you

tomorrow

Did you read

The poetry clippings

I compiled?

God, do you

glow

In windy nights

I forget there’s

A globe

Full of

stories sectored

Beyond what

You bellow

Am I alive

if

 

All of me

Is yours

© 2017 Chloe


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Beautiful use of words.
"All of me
Is yours"
I like the soft and tender journey in your words. You create places and photos for the reader. You create wild and gentle place and wonderful memory with your powerful description. Thank you Chloe for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Very caressing and your imagery was pleasing in words and mind. Really sweet write. Thanks for sharing.

~Rob~

Posted 7 Years Ago


It is amazing how that last "if" puts a whole new spin on the poem.....it started out with such confidence, that the writer is surely convinced that "all of me is yours" but that final "if" adds doubt, and even death - i.e. if "all of me is not yours" then life is not worth living...

Great poetry.

Posted 7 Years Ago


very good read. It took me to a place in my mind that I did not know I had.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like how you made unexpected associations between your lines. Really nice poem I feel like you took me on a drive through my mind in your hover car.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful use of words.
"All of me
Is yours"
I like the soft and tender journey in your words. You create places and photos for the reader. You create wild and gentle place and wonderful memory with your powerful description. Thank you Chloe for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Chloe
Chloe

New York, NY



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