Beautiful use of words.
"All of me
Is yours"
I like the soft and tender journey in your words. You create places and photos for the reader. You create wild and gentle place and wonderful memory with your powerful description. Thank you Chloe for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
It is amazing how that last "if" puts a whole new spin on the poem.....it started out with such confidence, that the writer is surely convinced that "all of me is yours" but that final "if" adds doubt, and even death - i.e. if "all of me is not yours" then life is not worth living...
I really like how you made unexpected associations between your lines. Really nice poem I feel like you took me on a drive through my mind in your hover car.
Beautiful use of words.
"All of me
Is yours"
I like the soft and tender journey in your words. You create places and photos for the reader. You create wild and gentle place and wonderful memory with your powerful description. Thank you Chloe for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
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