Three Drops

This is a poem I wrote about trying to save somebody from going further and further into a deep dark hole.

Three Drops

Three drops in a month, wow thats cool,

Flying high above all the cries,

Of the world, high above the drool,

Come down to the ones you love or die,

Your a walking mask, your no person,

Yes you laugh but this isn't you,

Who is this commiting arson,

Your not happy, figure what to do,

Killing yourself for a giggle,

Everyone knows your gone, no care

For where you are no phone jingle

Girl sort it out you've gone too far

Your the best thing that happened,

Wake up and catch her from falling,

Stop letting her just slide away man,

Hush don't listen to her begging,

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Anushka]

It's an awesome art. I am very much inspired by your poem and you. Your poem is so cute and you too.

[ATCcool]

really a cute poem.....the first paragraph is really awesome!!

but I didn't understand the last two lines in the last paragraph.....can you explain please?