Destruction

Destruction

A Poem by Chirinos20

I wake up every morning wondering the being of my existence.

I have read books and written many papers.

I cannot find an answer through them.

 

It is so hard to tell right from wrong when you are a kid.

It is hard to tell right from wrong when you have grown up.

 

You make a choice.

The choice might not be right.

Right is not a choice itself.

 

Being wrong is not a bad thing.

Being right might be.

Being right can result in chaos.

 

Chaos is a word for madness.

Chaos is destruction.

Chaos is me.

© 2010 Chirinos20


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Chirinos20
As always if you find mistakes please inform me. I hope you enjoy this write.

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A well formed work. I liked the structure and meaning. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


You bring up a great point between being right or wrong. Is there ever really a distinction? Sometimes being wrong is a way to learn and sometimes being right brings you down a less eventful path. I agree with Coyote Poetry though "Only wrong in life is not doing anything." Really a great poem that had me thinking.

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed this write immensely. The second to last stanza is amazing. It's to the point, but it is very strong. This is truly excellent. Great job, man.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Wow...there is a lot to think about in this piece. I love how you say being wrong can be right and being right can be wrong. Deffinitely made me think and you are so right about that. Great poem :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Only wrong in a life. Is not doing anything. A powerful poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

i liked this. i wrote something like this a long time ago.


you show some talent.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Tegucigalpa, Francisco Morazan, Honduras



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