Destruction

Destruction

A Poem by Chirinos20

I wake up every morning wondering the being of my existence.

I have read books and written many papers.

I cannot find an answer through them.

 

It is so hard to tell right from wrong when you are a kid.

It is hard to tell right from wrong when you have grown up.

 

You make a choice.

The choice might not be right.

Right is not a choice itself.

 

Being wrong is not a bad thing.

Being right might be.

Being right can result in chaos.

 

Chaos is a word for madness.

Chaos is destruction.

Chaos is me.

© 2010 Chirinos20


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Chirinos20
As always if you find mistakes please inform me. I hope you enjoy this write.

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It's really good.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice write - You might enjoy reading James Gleick's book entitled 'Chaos Theory' for a real mind bender...keep up the writing. Enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wonderful poem!
Loved it!
Great job here.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love that you say "Right is not a choice itself." I like where you went with this piece. A lot of wisdom in very few lines. I love sentences that can make me think in paragraphs. As the saying goes with no idea who I am quoting; "There is no such thing as right and wrong. There is only consequence."

Posted 14 Years Ago


what a grate poem
i liked this

ps. when ever people say chaos i always think of get smart lol

Posted 14 Years Ago


The choices you make may not always be right in the eyes of society, but as long as the choices feel right too you, you can not go wrong, Great Job:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


So true! It's not always about being right.

Posted 14 Years Ago


There is no such thing as right and wrong, there is what we do, what we don't do and the consequences that follow.
If you are not humbled by knowledge you have learnt nothing.

We are all born of Chaos.
It is why God gave us morality.
Keep faith, and keep writing, it has been a pleasure.

Posted 14 Years Ago


interesting i liked it

Posted 14 Years Ago


Interesting style ... full poem of feelings...
Good job:)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Tegucigalpa, Francisco Morazan, Honduras



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