Death is in me

Death is in me

A Poem by Chinnah!
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I was mad when i wrote this

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When I feel like hell
I just wanna kill myself
The people that I care for the most
End up killing me more
The judging and laughing
Just make me start crying
They don't seem to care
So I get hurt even more
I sit in the darkness alone
With only one light of hope
The light of God
That has kept me alive
A rush of electricity
To get away from this life
I just wanna scream "HELP!"
To get through my whole life

© 2011 Chinnah!


Author's Note

Chinnah!
this is how i feel most of the time when i get mad

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This is depressing to read. Those emotions sometimes aren't good especially when people are putting you down like that. You display your anger in a way that makes the reader feel pity. I like that.

Posted 13 Years Ago


"and though the rules of the road have been lodged
it's only people''s games you got to dodge.."
bob dylan

ppl suck and we learn from it hopefully

suicidal thoughts are normal..it's sweeping it under the rug that's abnormal


Posted 13 Years Ago


I hope life changes for you, for the better. This poem is heart breaking to read ...

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Chinnah!
Chinnah!

Pasco, WA



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Hi im Rocio AKA Chinnah.... I love Unicorns, Spongebob, and im a music addict add me if you want a weird friend haha jk... if you ever wanna talk just message me ill be all ears.... i love writting .. more..

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