Death is in me

I was mad when i wrote this

When I feel like hell

I just wanna kill myself

The people that I care for the most

End up killing me more

The judging and laughing

Just make me start crying

They don't seem to care

So I get hurt even more

I sit in the darkness alone

With only one light of hope

The light of God

That has kept me alive

A rush of electricity

To get away from this life

I just wanna scream "HELP!"

To get through my whole life

Author's Note

this is how i feel most of the time when i get mad

Reviews

[Suicidal Teddybear]

This is so sweet. I don't believe in God but, it really does make me smile when people turn to god and feel better. I admire the belief and trust that things will be OK and something that makes you feel better is worth keeping.

[CHRIS ANDES]

its good to know that you still have god, its a blessing actually that made you stronger...

[Cicera]

You say truly and I empathise with every word you say here. We could go as far as miles writing on a roll of paper the causes, the reasons, what is love and what is hate, and above all if it is really worth it.

Maybe sometimes the best thing is to get angry, to get mad and get it out of you at any cost. I hate to say that life is like this; I hate using that expression and make an excuse for everything that is just wrong, so damn wrong. But sometimes we have to accept that the roll just keeps on rolling out. And every new page, just as it brings something fresh and new, is a continuation of something that came before it. .

A pretty lie, don't you think? Maybe Sponge Bob has got the answer after all, somewhere out it will come one day. And you'll feel like you won the lottery! Maybe it is just a matter of waiting. .

[Dawn]

great job!

[stars are far]

Great poem :)

[Chinnah!]

thanx everyone for your honest reviews it really helps me believe in myself a little more :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Sad,powerful and intense....a great poem!!

[rwar ish me]

this is sad and I can really relate to this.
I love the emotion put into this.
Very well written
~Amai

[Ruth]

A lot can relate, power surge of honest and raw emotion love! xoxo

[nathan]

Wow that is intense!
I love the raw emotion in it.