Fantasy Nights

Fantasy Nights

A Poem by Cynthia Barrick (CHING CHING)

Night has fallen on us with a haze

All I feel is a heavy daze

Caught in a moment of fantasy night

Is this a feeling I should fight

I think not, not so clearly

All I feel is very weary

Heavy my heart pounds as I near you

Your breathing rapidly is this not true?!

© 2008 Cynthia Barrick (CHING CHING)


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Very beautiful! I feel my heart pounding a little faster!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Oh,such a big dream! I'm feeling high now,picturing a sweet scene of my fantasy.

Posted 16 Years Ago


This was a seductive piece it reminded me of being on E, awesome piece!

Posted 16 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

god... i actually felt my heart beat so fast...
words you speak of thy love are so little, yet pound they do so hard.

love it!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on February 23, 2008
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Cynthia Barrick  (CHING CHING)
Cynthia Barrick (CHING CHING)

Winter Haven, FL



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I like to write poetry. I am an artist who loves to draw, embroider, and paint. I love to sing and I love to make people laugh and smile. I am here for your entertainment! Amusing you will amuse m.. more..

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