Outside Looking In

Look deep within yourself and tell the truth, it shall set you free

Never again should you live a lie, for support is all you will receive from me

Cherish this now, for if you don't, one day it might be gone, never to return

Making a commitment to be just pals to grow and learn

Special you are and glad we are giving a shot at friendship

This is important to me, hopefully I can live up to your expectations of how  friends should be

Reviews

[Christina2]

Lovely! Love the first line, it spoke truths to me literally. Thank you for sharing.

[Angel's Lady]

Special you are and glad we are giving a shot at friendship - this is a really great line!

Excellently written! Friends forever, yes, indeed. I hope this can be said of us as well...
Always, me.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A wonderful write of friendship. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[JC Fox]

"Look deep within yourself and tell the truth, it shall set you free
Never again should you live a lie"
This was truly breath taking, not to mention truer words have not been spoken, some people really need to look inside and stop lying to themselves.

[A.r. Bazian]

Sincere
i like it!