" Meant to Be ? "

" Meant to Be ? "

A Poem by Cynthia Barrick (CHING CHING)

Can you really say goodbye

Without telling a lie

Talked so cruel trying to break my heart

Left me alone tore my world apart

Youthful were we and together as one

A bond unbreakable not to be undone

Went too far to turn back to what was then

I can say not to live those lies again

Meant to be, my heart says yes, but my mind says no

Was this because we really didnt want to know

Memories of our love will always stay

Even if in body we went astray

© 2008 Cynthia Barrick (CHING CHING)


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I really like the pace in this poem. It reads with great rhythm and the message sounds genuine and from the heart. I really like the emotions this brings out.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Good write to such a heartbreaking moment...

Can you really say goodbye
Without telling a lie

Excellent verse...

Posted 16 Years Ago


great emotion here.
Astray is misspelled. :)
Have fun.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Another great heart wrenching write, awesome poem!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on February 21, 2008
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Cynthia Barrick  (CHING CHING)
Cynthia Barrick (CHING CHING)

Winter Haven, FL



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I like to write poetry. I am an artist who loves to draw, embroider, and paint. I love to sing and I love to make people laugh and smile. I am here for your entertainment! Amusing you will amuse m.. more..

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