Love Live Feel

Love Live Feel

A Poem by Magnus
"

Be never afraid to love...

"
Am not afraid...am not afraid was all he could say.
To love..to live...to feel
how can I feel but not love not?
How can I love but feel not?
How can I live but love not?
Is it that I love but live not?
Or do I live but love not?
I am not afraid to love you!
Am not afraid to live for you
Am not afraid to feel for you
Am only afraid of not doing any of these things!

© 2014 Magnus


Author's Note

Magnus
I appreciate criticism that's constructive because am but a humble student! Thank you for taking the time to read and review it!

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The poem is perfect.
"Am not afraid to live for you
Am not afraid to feel for you
Am only afraid of not doing any of these things!"
The above lines are the proper way to live. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Magnus

9 Years Ago

Thank you! Glad you could relate to this piece!
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome. A powerful poem.



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speechless ..Your words are inspiring !! So happy to meet you!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Magnus

9 Years Ago

The feeling is mutual! I have reviewed your work and I remember telling you how beautiful it was! :-.. read more
The poem is perfect.
"Am not afraid to live for you
Am not afraid to feel for you
Am only afraid of not doing any of these things!"
The above lines are the proper way to live. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Magnus

9 Years Ago

Thank you! Glad you could relate to this piece!
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome. A powerful poem.
So many rhetorical questions! And the language is simple yet the message is so deep. Sigh! I everyone thought so, the world would be such a better place!
The ending is strong and hard hitting; free verse suits your style of writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Magnus

9 Years Ago

I appreciate the support! Thank you!

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Added on December 7, 2014
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Tags: love, live, feel, fear

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Magnus
Magnus

Luanshya, Copperbelt province, Zambia



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