Hate

Its up to an individual to interpret this poem...I leave this to you...you describe it in your own way! This is my way of partly explaining hate.

Am the F on ear that makes Fear. Believe am so near that you can hear. Am a beast so old that am rare...just one glare can trap you in my snare. I love the tears that come with all your fears. You dare not walk in the darkness for I am wat darkness is made of. I make even the fearless of men quiver n shiver...I do not bring death because death is a restful slumber...wats my name you may wonder...
I am hate, I am war, I am anarchy, I am deceit, I am an inbodiment of all manner of vile and vicious vendetta.

Author's Note

Be educative in your criticism as I am not but a humble student. Thank you for taking the time to read my work.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Hate and violence. No-one wins.
"I am hate, I am war, I am anarchy, I am deceit, I am an inbodiment of all manner of vile and vicious vendetta."
Your description of hate is true. Hate want profit, land and kill without mercy. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Magnus]

I am liking your insight on my pieces! I appreciate them it just makes me want to read your pieces more as the same insight is carried by your pieces. Thank you!

[Terrence Chang]

Well written about the entity of hate. I noticed that you have a good perspective on the subject. It is true that hate cares for none and destruction is absolute when using this entity
I also have my version on hate feel free to read it
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/TERRENCE007/1447095/

[Magnus]

Thanks and am heading to your page as soon as am done replying to this! (Eager)

[Terrence Chang]

Cool no problem I am also adding some more right now

[Magnus]

Read it and its differently written making it beautiful in its own right but still similar because hate is hate!

[Lizardo]

That line... ''I make even the fearless of men quiver n shiver'' that got to my head and heart, and the last line. You are very correct, it was nice reading it, a very nice poem.

[Magnus]

Thank you! This is the first time I am being reviewed by you and its awesome to know you liked my piece! Be sure to check out your pieces! Thanks a lot!

[Anuradha Verma]

Write this one in small verses, the paragraph presentation along with ellipsis makes it slightly hard to follow and the reading clunky. Also, spellcheck! I know most people don't pay any attention to it these days but correct grammar and spellings are very close to my heart.
The message is interesting and leaves plenty of room for imagination, but the presentation can be better. The last line, where Hate reveals itself is very good. but again, "embodiment" not "inbodiment".

[Magnus]

Am not only happy that you reviewed my piece but you gave me an angle at it that's helpful...talk about HELP this is what I look for in a helper thank you a million