Can You Save Me?

I do believe it speaks for itself.

   Can you save me

When the danger is not an outside source?

When everything around me is dying?

When darkness corrupts my mind like poison?

What if

You tried to save me.

Where would you start?

Can you heal a broken mind?

Mend a heart that bleeds with

every

passing

beat?

Let's say

You do save me somehow.

Tomorrow I'll wake up

And it'll all be the same

Or will it?

Will I be able to step out of the shadows?

Accept who I am and learn to stop hating?

Can you teach me how to love anything again?

 

I'm asking the wrong question...

Not "can you...", but

Would you?

 

Author's Note

Anything. Don't hold back.

Reviews

[David W Moore III]

Can you mend a heart that bleeds... Would you? That is a good question. We all search for that savior/prince in shining armor. When they come into our lives it's a whirlwind. Sometimes I wish we had a little more control over saving our own lives. Very provacative piece. Nicely done v

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Still I think this is amazing. I really like it. :)

[KarinaKrinkle]

Wow this is very good. Keep it up.

[r]

This is laid out awesomely, and I absolutely love the last stanza. "I'm asking the wrong question...//Not 'can you...', but//Would you?" Amazing poem.

[Steve]

Wow.....i like how this one is laid out...very nice. You are very intelligent i can tell.....

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think this is an amazing poem. I really feel like it is good. Thanks for sharing. :)