Colorful Soul

Something I just wrote at the time, more like a doodle but in the form of writing

I will color the sky in rainbows

Douse the walls with joy and happiness

You can take my voice, you can take it all away

But you cannot take the gay, the happiness in my heart

You can take my life but you can never take away the love

That will forever live in our souls

Though fear and death may claw at life's strings

The soul will go on and grow its own wings

Justice will prevail, love wins, and life goes on

Author's Note

Well I have to say the colors are a little annoying to me, I don't know if anyone else will be annoyed by them? Anyway, criticism is welcome. Thank you for reading and don't hesitate to click this thingamabob: https://www.youcaring.com/cassandra-bracy-581566

Reviews

[AmberL]

I liked this (: Very simple, but a good message.

[Chidoriflower]

OmG. Thank you :)

[AmberL]

No problem (:

[Akashi]

You stole my idea from two years ago. No three years ago! http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Akashi/1191251/

[Chidoriflower]

I didn't steal your idea lol. None of the lines in my poem are even close to yours. And the subject of the poems are different

[Akashi]

:/ None of the lines are close? Okay then....