Dance with Me, Please

This is straightforward as is possible. I love dancing. And no, this isn't clubbing. I go to a swing-dance-spot with a nice cafe attached to it.

The music's playing, every beat echoes the beat of my soul

The people laughing, flirting with complete lovely strangers

But you're not here, my laugh isn't real, isn't whole

The lights flash, boom and sparkle, like fireworks

Every step is fluid, the dance gives light to dangers

But physical pain is nothing to these lonely hurts

It doesn't matter if you can't sleep with me

This dance floor is only mastered by you

And without that single smile, I go crazy

Author's Note

THAT ONE PERSON

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Dance and song. Always a good place to know. I enjoyed the poem and I liked the description. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[SquinklaPsyOps]

"Music unquestionably affects our emotions. We tend to listen to music that reflects our mood. When we’re happy we may listen to upbeat music; when we’re sad we may listen to slower, moving songs; when we’re angry we may listen to darker music with heavy guitar, drums, and vocals that reflect our level of anger."

[Chidoriflower]

Ah very true Miss. Thank you for your review.

[Edward Lancheister]

good imagery words, i like the words " Every step is fluid, the dance gives light to dangers
But physical pain is nothing to these lonely hurts" thats when the words expression is good

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you Ed :)

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Simply Beautiful I love dancing it is like your soul is
singing Upon the Dance floor with the sways and movements
Just like the words that Dance upon the paper when a poet sings their feelings.


My Great Grandma was a Ballet Dancer so I have a passion
for it like I do writing I have done many poems of dancing it is
a art a beautiful Painting waiting to be discovered
many don't understand Dance that you become the Beat like the movement
dance with your curves and your heart a feeling a ever movement and there
is some that don't get poetry it is almost the same it is a passion a
caressing movement upon the paper but it is more then that really.


Thank you for inspiring this is aver inspiring write
nicely penned thank you for your lovely review and comment
you left on my page and thank you for this powerful piece of work.



Blessings. kindred poet

[Chidoriflower]

That's quite an eloquent review, Mademoiselle. I'd love to see you dance one day.
Thank you so much dear!!! ^^

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're very welcome. it's my pleasure always. this write inspired me so thank you. Blessings. Kindred poet

[Sami Khalil]

Dreams come true. Bravo.....................

[Sami Khalil]

The lights flash, boom and sparkle, like fireworks
Every step is fluid, the dance gives light to dangers
But physical pain is nothing to these lonely hurts"

Dreams come true. A splendid poem...:)..........................

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you so much! :)
I'll keep on dreaming. I appreciate your review, greatly. :)

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:)....

[Kurayami]

This is a wonderful poem.

~Kurayami

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you, Kurayami-san. :)