Blow-up

In a spurt of random thought....

Dip your toes into the violet galaxy

Soak in space dust, blown up asteroids

Milky white star flesh makes seeing hazy

But there's always window shield-wiper androids

Pale white rabbit is making rice on the moon

Why? It's already made of blue cheese

I want to be alone; so let's go, there's a lot of room

Will you stay or float away, tell me please

Brush your fingertips through a blazing super-nova

Embraced by hyper-color, silent implosion

Spark for a second, a minute as a dying lover

Going down in fervent flame, beautiful explosion 

Reviews

[Aethereal]

This is an amazing mix of galactic talent. It inspired me to write my own mix of such within this tiny gift poem which your may keep as your own.

Star Mates

Spiraling orbs spin as they may
in a haze of tar, char and clay .
These bright lovers are stars at play
who defy quasar jars that sway.

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you so much. The gift poem is brilliant and majestic. ^^

[Bianca]

This is like a bowl of soup it has a little bit of everything. :D "Pale white rabbit is making rice on the moon
- Why? It's already made of blue cheese" - you painted this picture in my head and well… It's cool. @.@ Keep painting beautiful explosions with your words!

[Chidoriflower]

Kyaaa! Thank you so much!!! >3>

[Miranda Richard]

This is very abstract, and I like it that way. The last stanza captivated me, "going down in a feverent flame, beautiful explosion." I sometimes write random things like this too, I have one called "fish kiss," that's a bit out there if you'd like to check it out. Good job, keep writing :)

[Chidoriflower]

Heh heh I will. Thank you so much. :)

[Dark Princess]

Amazing connections of ideas. It was incredibly random but in a way every idea came together and kinda made sense.

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you! :)

[Angels heart]

It's is... About space? Idk, but even though I don't know I like it, you must really be in tune with your ideas to pull something as random as this off. ;) I meant that as a good thing.

[Chidoriflower]

Hehheh Thanks. xP

[zainul]

This is a wonderful piece.

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you, zainul.

[zainul]

You are most welcome.:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts in the poem. The good description took the reader to many good places. Life should be like the poem. Filled with amazing stars and beautiful explosions. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you, Coyote. I appreciate it.

[Bluefire]

So beautiful, I love the imagery and sometimes humor of this piece. It reminds me of Owl City's "Alligator Sky."
Well done!

[Chidoriflower]

I was listening to Owl City when I wrote this. xD Thank you so much. :)

[Bluefire]

Awesome! Lol, no problem. ^^

[Kenneth The Poet]

Now I want one of those specialty salads you see advertised on TV. The second stanza took me there, thank you for the random connection due to randomly excellent piece.

[Chidoriflower]

Ah....the randomness randomly stimulates my senses....I have a lot of salad recipes...Thank you very much, Kenneth. :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

No problem.