Strings of Fire

Scarlet fire, flames of flower

Suffocating smoke, spiraling, softly

Violet strips, and pink clouds mixed with sunset

Fingers rise, and reach, orange, a raving plague

Cars slow, soaking in the splendid sight

Faint wails, carried by the west winds

Pointing fingers, flailing, ash is falling

Gentle burning, boasting of it's bright

Soon water will consume, and it will be, finally,

Night 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The strong description create places of fire and the expanding hunger. I did like the ending. Left a open ending and thoughts with the reader. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Having been in a forest fire this is well observed.

[Chidoriflower]

It was a sight I won't forget soon....Thank you for the review.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

WOW love how you Brought this to life.
Love these lines. Blessings

Scarlet fire, flames of flower


Suffocating smoke, spiraling, softly

Violet strips, and pink clouds mixed with sunset

[Chidoriflower]

Thank you so much! :')

[Bluefire]

-Fades into a daze like Fuko with a starfish- *-*
I love this one the most.
Well done!

[Chidoriflower]

You can never get her away from her starfish carvings...*.*
Thank you so much! Your reviews always fill up my heart. :)

[Bluefire]

xD No problem. I still can't get over how she hijacked that machine, got the star instead of the bear, and just ran off.

[Chidoriflower]

lol I love that part. At first I thought they were stars, like Tomoya, but then I realized. o.o

[Bluefire]

xD must be sick in the head or something because I thought they were starfish from the beginning. x.x
That is the natural thought, that they would be stars.

[Chidoriflower]

I'm almost upset that I'm naturally thinking. o.O xD

[Bluefire]

Awe, lol xD

[Angels heart]

I feel like you are talking about the sun and how it can be sometimes to bright and big that it can be 'suffocating' I like how I can see what you see. I really like all your poems and I hope you will write more.

[Chidoriflower]

I was looking at a house on fire....xD It's something like the sun....bright and big that may not be put out. Thank you very much. :) Your kindness warms my heart. :)

[Angels heart]

Sorry, I'm such an airhead, but now that u say wat it is I can see it like a house on fire ;)

[Chidoriflower]

Heehee yeah. :)